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by Pokeprof

schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is good, this is very good. I like how you mixed the humor with the adventure. And your ideas on Pokegirls are good. I'm of to read the next chapter.
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
like I said, I love the discriptions of the pokegirls, and if I haven't, i'm doing it now. Also, don't worry about the 'taming' secen's, you actually have done it perfectly. Not to little information, it gives a general idea, but not to much that it doesn't let the readers imagination take over. plese don;t give up on this fic and update sooner then in a five months time period.

later.
person furvert
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story. keep writing.




heh...titacruel.
person bill
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good job. Don't quit writting like everyone else that does a pokegirl story. I like the story.
person Anon
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What's with the whole 'pokégilr' thing? What is it, really?
person gilmaxter
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story dude. update it soon ^^
person Another Commentator
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
For a first story this is rather good....Actually, for any story this is rather good. I would like to see this story continue. Pls. More. ^_^
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Me likie so very much. I hope to see more soon.
Miyuutsuu. XD
person someone
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awsome story keep it up

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