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May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I thought this was really good. I read another fic about Kira raping Sara, but I think this is a more realistic portrayal of how things would happen if Kira and Sara were together. Kira cares about Setsuna, and Sara as well, so I thought this was an excellent oneshot.
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January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Phew...poor Kira~~ very well done!
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November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
really good! hope you're other stories are as good as this one was!
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October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is so beatifully written, the language and flow of your style is refreshing to look at. I'm happy to see a Kira/Sara fic so many kudos for you.
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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
the first person shit has got to go, its more like a poem then a story. Come on, use third person or something, this is just horrible. What do I know though? I've never written a story, I just read them. I just dont like this one.
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July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What can I say? You've got talent.
Your style and language is great. I look up to your writing.
I'm struggling really, because I don't know what else to say, but
you captured the situation really well.
Because... of course everything is better when it's forbidden.
Right?
xKit
Your style and language is great. I look up to your writing.
I'm struggling really, because I don't know what else to say, but
you captured the situation really well.
Because... of course everything is better when it's forbidden.
Right?
xKit
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June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it. Very intense.
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know it's rare for me to find a good Kira/Sara fic and this one just made the day for me. I enjoyed the realism it gave off without being out of character. I liked this very much. Thanks.