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YES! You updated!! XD And such a great chapter, too! That was sweet when Mugen gave Fuu the soap, but it didn't seem OOC since he was disgusted with himself and just chucked it at her instead of handing it over in a sweet and loving manner. =-P lol

Mugen and Fuu need to be alone, and STAT! Haha, I can definitely see how much Mugen wants her, and it's cute - I love this fic! Thanks for finally updating! XD Just update again ASAP, please!1

Wow, this is a great fic!!! I am loving all the emotional discoveries Mugen is making. I also really like the way you write Jin. Excellent, excellent work! Please keep updating!!!

YAY YOU UPDATED!!!! i have been waiting for this it seems like forever. please please please don't make me wait that long again!!!!

Since I loved this so much, I took the liberty of compiling all my thoughts as I eagerly breezed on through, so here they are:

I ADORE this...I especially loved Fuu's vulnerability when she told Mugen that she loved him. I mean, you set it up so that it seemed a shock to the reader, as well as Mugen, even though we knew long before him that she adored him.
I like how you took the angle where Mugen feels he can't be loved - I've never seen it done before, and you deliver it quite effectively. :)
I liked how Jin's drunken stupor lightened the mood. ^_^ Mugen's reaction to Fuu giving herself up in CH 7 was all completely sweet - I thought the lemon was beautiful and very well-done. :) Somehow, however, I don't see sunny skies in their future... -_-'
The bridge scene in CH 10 reminded me very much of Indiana Jones - was it inspired by that, perchance?? ^^
Gods, and that last chapter was a tease! How VERY cruel of you to end it there! =-P You MUST update ASAP for the sake of all that is holy! ;0)

yes,yes,yes,yes,yes,yes,yes,yes,yes,yes,yes,yes,yes,yes,yes,yes,yes,yes,yes,yes,yes,yes,yes,yes,yes,yes,yes! My grin is threatening to split my face apart. I am SOOOO glad that you updated! Once again, a literary superior chapter. I am so excited to read more, and sincerely hope that you can update more. YAY!!!!!

WOW...just WOW!!! I've only read the 1st chapter and I'm ALREADY blown away! The beauty of the description, the way Fuu's tending to her companions...::sighs:: Very beautiful, indeed. :) I'm going to some festival or another right now, but believe me...I WILL return to this gem! ::crosses fingers:: I hope it's a Fuugen! ;0)

NO! NOOOOOOOOOO! You can't leave it there!!! I just found this story tonight, and have read all ten chapters without pause! You are a Literary GODDESS!!!! You have characters right on point, from Fuu's stubborness borne out of love for her friends, to Mugen's utter bewilderment at love in general, to Jin's fierce devotion to the people who came to mean so much to him. Wonderfully done, and I hope you continue to update!!!!

The characterizations are great, the interpretations of feelings and emotions and the resulting actions are very realistic, the flow of the story as well as the writing style are wonderful! The humorous parts were just as great as the angst and the romance. The sex scene as well as the action sequence were wonderfully written! Thanks for a great read!

I just read your story and I hope Jin is alive.