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May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhhh I so, so loved this!! Can´t write a detailed review at the moment, I haven´t recovered from the very, _very_ juicy lemons yet... You can´t imagine how damn glad I was when Schu and Brad and Yohji and Aya _finally_ got together... at least in a sexual way. Really, all four of them made things more complicated than they had to be. But oh well, that´s Weiss Kreuz. Nothing´s easy in there^^
Hehe, and I really liked Aya-chan in this fanfic... damn this woman is great *smiles*
Anyways, wonderful fanfic!
Hehe, and I really liked Aya-chan in this fanfic... damn this woman is great *smiles*
Anyways, wonderful fanfic!
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February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know this isn't a new story, but it's new to me. And I LOVE IT!
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January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic! I wish I could be more constructive, I usually am, but you know what? This time I'll surrender to the bubbly enthusiasm. This review may be late in the game, but every time I'm in the mood for a Weiss Kreuz story, I usually come back to this one. You can really turn a phrase, and I am utterly grateful.
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December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was going to be so good and review every chapter. I was really. Honest. But I couldn't stop reading long enough to do it. The next chapter link is before the review link and my cursor just couldn't get past it! That was awesome. A superb blend of angst, humour, smut and serious glimpses into their heads. So many wonderful moments that made me laugh, sniffle and fan myself - good job it is below freezing outside, fresh air does help the over heating. Thank you for writing this, finishing it and sharing it!
I am so glad someone was looking for this fic on the Yohji-Aya ML (I can never remember the proper name) because that meant I got the link too! I'd thank them both, searcher and answerer, if only I could remember my password to get on there properly... And, yes, my memory sucks! lol
I am so glad someone was looking for this fic on the Yohji-Aya ML (I can never remember the proper name) because that meant I got the link too! I'd thank them both, searcher and answerer, if only I could remember my password to get on there properly... And, yes, my memory sucks! lol
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December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Just wanted to say I loved your story... It's dead awesome... I neglected my girlfriend (altough I didn't really know that untill about 2 minutes ago) and didn't do anything but read for the past... 5 and a half hours I think? Read it all in one sitting. What's the name of the sequal? I really, honesty, very much want to read that. <3
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THUMB WAR!!!! XD
OMG I LOVE THIS soooooooo MUCH!!!!!!!!!!
OMG I LOVE THIS soooooooo MUCH!!!!!!!!!!
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wooooooow. i stayed up all night just to finish this story. ^_^ it's 6am now & i have papers & tests to write tomorrow -scratch that, today. ......i blame u, ya know. *F1* *cackles*
boy!! i NEVER want to see what happenes to ppl who get on your bad side! some of the stuff u came up with for Schu..... *whistles*
well, off to see how else we can torture Brad & Nagi. ^_^ (& Yohji of course)
boy!! i NEVER want to see what happenes to ppl who get on your bad side! some of the stuff u came up with for Schu..... *whistles*
well, off to see how else we can torture Brad & Nagi. ^_^ (& Yohji of course)
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok. now that i've slept some & the fangirl ness has worn off slightly....
you have a very clear writing style -maybe it's cause i was half-asleep ^_~, or enjoying the story so much but i don't recall a single typo/misspelling/glaring grammatical error, etc. Kudos. ^_^
u've created such a Realistic scenario (yes, even with Schwarz around ~.~), the lack of communication between people who feel things for each other is icredible. I've gotten throught the first chapter of "Shades & Hues" at least, & I just want Aya-chan to go see Yohji before he gets out of bed in the morning (with all that stuff lying around), figure it all out & go tear Ran a new one. ^_^ but alas, i know it cannot be this simple..... especially if Schu gets angry or bored again. XD
you have a very clear writing style -maybe it's cause i was half-asleep ^_~, or enjoying the story so much but i don't recall a single typo/misspelling/glaring grammatical error, etc. Kudos. ^_^
u've created such a Realistic scenario (yes, even with Schwarz around ~.~), the lack of communication between people who feel things for each other is icredible. I've gotten throught the first chapter of "Shades & Hues" at least, & I just want Aya-chan to go see Yohji before he gets out of bed in the morning (with all that stuff lying around), figure it all out & go tear Ran a new one. ^_^ but alas, i know it cannot be this simple..... especially if Schu gets angry or bored again. XD
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November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohh I have been reading this fic the whole evening and loving every word of it. I'm not very good at reviewing but damn I just had to tell how much I enjoyed reading this fic. Ohhhh and the last part where Schu and Yohji talked rocked my boat. I felt really sorry for Brad for some reason. I feel for Schuldig I really do )he is my fave of Schwarz) but in this story for some reasong Brad moved me more.
And Aya wanting it to be only sex was a surprise *wince* but leaves open things for the sequel. I like the idea of a sequel.
Also Aya being the seme was a pleasant surprised. I would have loved the story no mattter who tops but Aya as a top is seen more rarely than Yohji ast the top in their pairing. So it was refresing.
annakas
And Aya wanting it to be only sex was a surprise *wince* but leaves open things for the sequel. I like the idea of a sequel.
Also Aya being the seme was a pleasant surprised. I would have loved the story no mattter who tops but Aya as a top is seen more rarely than Yohji ast the top in their pairing. So it was refresing.
annakas
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November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm just making my way through the story from the beginning, as you'll gather from my review. . . .
So Yohji and Schuldig arent't taking this "being enemies" thing all that serious any longer, eh? Gotta love that and the way they pass their time on the sidelines of battle. lol
//And he tried to ignore how good it felt, when he teased Nagi into laughing, and Brad actually almost sort of smiled at him.// LOL! So, who said that Fujimiya Ran was the only icicle around? Poor Schuldig and Yohji. *gg* How lucky that Aya-chan is there to support the Weiß playboy. Quite perceptive, the girl, isn't she? And if Aya refuses to shop for clubbing clothes with Yohji, he'll get them as a present from his sister? Clever move! Hehe.
Just why does a Schwarz celebration of the Fourth of July sound like BIG trouble to my ears? Tikitta-booms, eh? Uh-oh! ^^ And what a uh-oh that turned out to be! Yay for Farfarello's fireworks, telecinetically composed apple pie, potato-salad projectiles and genuinely amused Oracles. Score 1 for Schuldig, I'd say. ^^
So much for feedback on chapters 1-6. I'm loving this, so I'll be back with more once I manage to squeeze in some time to read further. Fantastic job so far!
P.s.: I caught a little mistake in your use of German. In chapter 4, you let Schuldig say "Was ist das?" as the literal translation of "What is it?" (or so I assume). The correct phrase to use would be "Was ist los?" Not to come across as picky or anything, but your writing is so flawless and well-polished otherwise that I thought you might wish to know. Oh, and should you ever need any advice concerning German words or phrases, don't hesitate to ask me. It's my native language, after all. ;)
So Yohji and Schuldig arent't taking this "being enemies" thing all that serious any longer, eh? Gotta love that and the way they pass their time on the sidelines of battle. lol
//And he tried to ignore how good it felt, when he teased Nagi into laughing, and Brad actually almost sort of smiled at him.// LOL! So, who said that Fujimiya Ran was the only icicle around? Poor Schuldig and Yohji. *gg* How lucky that Aya-chan is there to support the Weiß playboy. Quite perceptive, the girl, isn't she? And if Aya refuses to shop for clubbing clothes with Yohji, he'll get them as a present from his sister? Clever move! Hehe.
Just why does a Schwarz celebration of the Fourth of July sound like BIG trouble to my ears? Tikitta-booms, eh? Uh-oh! ^^ And what a uh-oh that turned out to be! Yay for Farfarello's fireworks, telecinetically composed apple pie, potato-salad projectiles and genuinely amused Oracles. Score 1 for Schuldig, I'd say. ^^
So much for feedback on chapters 1-6. I'm loving this, so I'll be back with more once I manage to squeeze in some time to read further. Fantastic job so far!
P.s.: I caught a little mistake in your use of German. In chapter 4, you let Schuldig say "Was ist das?" as the literal translation of "What is it?" (or so I assume). The correct phrase to use would be "Was ist los?" Not to come across as picky or anything, but your writing is so flawless and well-polished otherwise that I thought you might wish to know. Oh, and should you ever need any advice concerning German words or phrases, don't hesitate to ask me. It's my native language, after all. ;)