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for Nothing Ventured, Nothing Gained

by KDSarge

person Jet Mykles
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! If it means more of the story, I'll keep egging you on. What a wonderful shopping spree. Although, you should've let Aya get measured... and let Yohji do the measuring *licks lips* LOL Well done
person tkmaxwell777
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay... I'm reviewing... NOW POST THE NEXT PART! *LOL* Seriously, this is a very interesting story. The characterizations are just wonderful, the humor of the two sexy counterparts is just awesome, and the whole concept of them betting and having the little competitions during the fights is SO COOL! The way they're so alike in personality and being in love with their respective leaders adds a great depth to this. I really hope you'll post more soon... I'll be looking for it! *huggles*

TK ^___^
person DakotaRei
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You keep stopping! *sob* I love the idea of Schu making apple pie. Its awesome. Please update again soon! Please?! I'm begging now.
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Picture me laughing hysterically, because this was awesome. I've only read the first chapter so far, but I fully intend to read the rest as well. What an original and intriguing idea, the two of them making bets about their team-mates.

--Omi
person Theblackpanther
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Farfarello and fireworks...Scary...

Poor Aya and Brad, they must be wondering how the hell the pod people stole their teammates...
person dd
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
:3 Pleeeeeeeeeease update? I love your fic sooo much! *points shaking finger* NOW! YOU THERE! UPHOLD YOUR END OF THE BARGAIN!
person Theblackpanther
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome so far! I can't wait for the next chapter!
person Fujimiya Ran
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
X3 It's adorable...hn...you most definitly have to continue this, or ...o.o I won't post the set I've next for my Weiss XD >.>;; Not that that matters, however! ;=; Update! XP
person vivacious
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is one of the best weiss fics i've read in a while. so please keep up the good work.although i'm rooting for yohji and aya... i have to admit yohji in a leash and on his knees at the mercy of shu-chan is really tempting. maybe that can be another fic...
person Princess Sin
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey, you never said if they called the bet off. but
i think this chapter is great. it seems that yohji
is winning the bet.

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