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for Nothing Ventured, Nothing Gained

by KDSarge

person Glorry
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey the story is great I really love it.
But it means Gott in der Hölle if you mean god in hell
Sorry but I'am German myself and I need a bit till I got it.
Wish ya a nice day by
person MissEntropy
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God. That was so great. I'm really looking forward to the sequel. My only complaints about the whole thing were chapters 16 & 17. They lacked a certain flow but except for those two chapters the rest of the story was wonderful. That's not to say I didn't enjoy those two chapters but the continuity that ran throughout the rest of the story was lacking there. Good job though and I can't wait to read more.
person evil
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was a bit skeptical about some parts, but in the end, it was great. I like the conversation between Youji and Schu in the last part. very good. thanks for writing and I am waiting for that promised sequel. Hope you write more about schul and crawford though.
person Lurker #202
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story, i look foward to the sequel ^_^
person throwerchick
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
one of my favorite fics thus far.. bravo!! *runs off to re-read the glorious smut..*
person DakotaRei
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'd prefer sugar with a Schu on top, but you know I always review for you anyways, so Yohji will have to do. XD

I still love this story! I was so sad when I thought it was going to be over. OVER! But then you said the magic word....SEQUEL! YAY! *glomp*

I hope you get the sequel up soon! I can't wait!
person libellule
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoyed this story. I liked how you didn't use the old misunderstanding plot, that Aya understood and wasn't mad at Yohji over the bet. You almost made me like Schulding after reading a story about him torturing and raping Aya the other day! I like Weiss even though I don't know a whole lot about it. Sorry just did not like the anime and didn't finish watching it. One thing I like is that it so similar to Saiyuki which I love (have all anime and manga) but there isn't a whole lot of Goyjo/Sanzo, but there is Yohji (sp?)/aya and that's such a similar combo. Ladies' man vs bitchy dangerous ice princess. Thanks, Libe
person Leela
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm sooo glad there's going to be a sequel, you had me worried! Loved this, though wished it had been longer.
person Nomme de Plume
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh, that ending is quite funny...but...i want aya to loooooooooove yohji!!!! anyway, great story! what's next for you? ^______^
person Goddess of Magick
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was so good I read it all in one shot! I loved the way you kept me between 'awww'-ing and laughing myself silly the whole time. Excellent job!

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