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for Nothing Ventured, Nothing Gained

by KDSarge

person tokageMusume
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Six -- Loved the exploding 4th of July dinner! That was fun. And Nagi... wanting to help Schu in hopes of having a nicer home. Poor little bugger! Well... Youji gets to dress Aya the way he wants... I guess he didn't think that through all the way.. Aya's gonna look HOT at the club! Youji's gonna be fighting for his attention if he's not careful!
Well -- that's all that's out here for now. I really look forward to your next posting. Thanks so much for publishing this! -- tM
person DakotaRei
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay. Yay. Yay. I love updates. ...(I should make more of them XD)...But I love this story! The 4th of July celebration Schu planned was great. Hilarious. Farf should come do fireworks in my town on the 4th of July this year. He should just...keep them away from my house. And I am also interested to see what happens when (and if) Ran goes out with Yohji. update again? Please?
person tokageMusume
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1 -- I love the tone of this but I especially love the descriptions of the Weiss Tai Schwarz "fights"!! Perfect description of those silly, silly encounters! LOL I also love the way Schu and Youji are just sort of natural friends. It doesn't strike me OOC for either one of them. I'm enjoying this... Thanks!
person tokageMusume
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Two -- Gentlemen, start your engines. This chapter got hold of me and just drug me straight through... Um... I'm trying to get off line here -- got stuff to do -- This is very cool! I love the differentiation between Aya and Ran in Youji's picture of La Fujimiya. Very slick POV. And I'm getting a kick out of Schu falling in love with BradAsDad... What fun this is!
person Magiccat
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like your humor, you definitely had me grinning throught the whole story so far. I would love to see Brad & Ana figure out what is happening an come up with a plan together to drive their would-be lovers up the wall. Whatever direction you decide to go in I will be looking forward to reading it. Thanks for the work you are putting into this.
person tokageMusume
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"“Green light, Yohji-kun.” " ... Geez, how often do you get official blessing from the itty-bitty imouto? And Schu... trying to understand Americana for Brad! Too funny! I did get off line for a bit... bungled around and thought, "The hell with it!" and decided to just come read the rest of this. I think that's called...um, being riveted, isn't it? *g*
person Blythe
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Schu-bear! I can't believe he actually put that much effort into something. Poor sap has got it bad! And Yohji, taking the suicidal approach, somehow doesn't surprise me. I'm sure they had the best intentions when they made their bet, but we all know where that road leads... Can't wait to see Aya in his birthday suit...No, no, no! I mean the one Yohji bought him! More, please!
person Forgotten sunrise
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh meh gawd~ You really really have to finish this! I love the scheming that's going on. That and the Farfarello images on the rafter and "singing Abyssinian'a praises." :D
*claps hand* Another chapter please! I was a good reader and did what you asked!! :3
person Jet Mykles
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh lovely! Schu and Yohji make such a wicked pair, even when they're not the pair LOL
person Jet Mykles
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh please please please post more!! This is delightful! and Aya-chan helping is too good *g*

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