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Oh God!!! I Love it!!!!

Hey, Luna. It's been a while since I first read this, but I recently rediscovered my old ES21 books, and wanted to re-read your fics. And I haven't reviewed this one yet, so here goes.

You are fantastic at this whole writing thing. Really. I couldn't do this good if I had unlimited free time, five gallons of coffee, and a $50,000 genius grant. So good on yer, mate.

I wish you'd find the time to update Hoshi no Tengoku or add another one-shot or something, but eh, everyone's busy. I had to kill myself to get out a couple Eyeshield stories a few weeks ago, which I only did because of the growing amount of Hiru/Mamo shit on Fanfiction (hey, somebody's got to combat it...). Anyway, I look forward to future works of yours. Without you, there would be no Hiru/Sena smut for me to read...

Ciao!
~Werefox Alchemist

SHIT THAT WAS NICE. XD

I love your fics! I think you're the only hiruma/sena writer...I wonder what could've happened if hiruma didn't broke free...I was really surprised when hiruma broke his handcuffs.O.o He must REALLY wanna fuck sena ^ ^ I hope you keep making more hiruma/sena fanfics!

Holy...SHIT that was friggen hot... -fans self with hands and coughs, blinking back to reality-I was a little bit iffy at first when I noticed Sena was being completely dominant, but then I started getting into it and was cheering him on! And when Hiruma broke the handcuffs...I was like..nooooo!!Sena must be in control! But there was more hot lemon so I didnt really mind. lmao XD
Gah! I am infected but your continuous-update pace! I shall try to match you and join you in this battle to fill the aff eyeshield section with hot smexy sena/hirumaness!!

HOLY SHI~~~~~~~~T!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! My goodness, you are definitely my favourite HiruSena writer!!!!!!!! This was your best fic yet!!!! (Although Hoshi no Tengoku it's very near it. and also your drabbles. screw it, i love them all). Man, Sena a little dominatrix, this was a very refreshing idea, becase you only see him as the cute one, the feminine one, the one getting controlled. Now, in this precious story of yours, although he can't overpower Hiruma (as we can read almost at the end) he will be damned if he doesn't try. I would like tofind out what Sena did to trick Hiruma though, and also what would happen after *coughsequelcough*. And this time there's no little after-owari bonus, but i can't complain, after all this is such a long fic.

At first I was a little confused, because Sena had Hiruma tied down and you announced "Sena Uke" (I thought Sena was going to punish Hiruma with more traditional techniques *wink*), but then he actually was a dominating uke, he is the one getting penetrated after all; I don't think Hiruma will be willing to have a dildo up his ass.

Seriously, this was beatiful and sexy and hot. No way around it.