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for No Mercy

by Blythe

schedule May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story (and the previous one) so very much. I would love to see you continue it. But even if you can't, I wanted you to know how wonderful I think it is. Thanks.
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just to say, I'm at the end of Chapter 5 and you've done a great job keeping Manx in character, because I loathe her with every fiber of my being - exactly like I hated her in the show.

I am very curious abut Keiji and what happened to him. I half hope Yohji killed him. The other half of me hopes Aya will get to.

Poor messed up Yohji. I hope Aya gets it together enough to save them both.

Great job on the angst, by the way. Very believable and not the slightest over the time. I almost cried in chapter one.
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't care, I still hate Manx. Lots. Maybe even more than before.

However, I did like Yohji getting rid of Keiji and I thought the reunion scene was fantastic - original and unexpected.

Is it too early to start whining for happily ever after?
person Anon
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome... i readily await more.
person fireun
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
a while back i read Not Now Not Ever, and was floored. so very well written. you have no idea how happy i was to find a companion piece. there might have been a sort of embarrassing little dance involved, but i shall spare you the details. wonderful stories. both parts. i especially have enjoyed your characterization of Manx in the recent chapters. its nice to see her with more character depth. now, pardon me whilst i camp out and merrily, patiently, wait for more.
person Gossa
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*cracks whip* faster, cheetah, faster.
Lovely as usual.
but rawr for leaving us hanging ;p
person V
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woo-hoo! An update! Although, I do find it a bit difficult to imagine lanky Yohji as child-like, he seemed so cute in this chapter! That, and on the verge of death. I hope Aya can actually help Yohji this time. All these misunderstandings between them are driving me nuts! Update soon, please.
person Tlynn
schedule August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad that you updated, I love this story. You do angst in a very real way that makes it that much better. I can wait till we find out what they say to each other.
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AAARRRGH! You must finish! You must finish now! Oh gods, please don't tell me that Manx is going to spirit Yohji away just before Aya gets there! I don't think I could take it!

*g* Lovely, Blythe!
person RebelC
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dont feel the need to review much.But your work is very very good. Kudos to you and your talent.
Please do continue.

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