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December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story, but a spell check is in order, no offense or anything
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August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... i liked it. I think that you should continue and soon! can't wait for the lemon.
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July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww Poor Ryo, Dee is such a pouncer, a friend said I'm like that...*snicker* anyway please continue
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good start. I noticed a few misspelled words here and there. I also felt that you tried to rush everything you had into a short paragraph here and there. I am looking forward to seeing what else you have in store for these guys in later chapters. Keep up the good work.