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December 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like the idea for this story.
There are a few problems though.
The format is messed up. Maybe you should convert the html file into TXT.
Mayura's funeral. I'm not an expert on traditional Japense funerals so I'll tell you what I know.
Mayura and her father are practitioners of the Shinto religion. Miso is a Shinto priest and she's a Miko. They live in a Shinto shrine too.
Mayura's body would have been dressed in a plain white cotton or linenn kimono with the right flap over left. Left flap over right is for the living.
After the funeral her body would have been cremated. Her ashes would be placed inside a small urn then burried.
Even though Miso lives in a shrine he would still have a small shrine inside the house dedicated to deceased family members in the lveing room.
Her father would have a small mortuary tablet with her name written on it and have a photo of her. Since his wife is also dead, her photo and tablet would also be there.
There are a few problems though.
The format is messed up. Maybe you should convert the html file into TXT.
Mayura's funeral. I'm not an expert on traditional Japense funerals so I'll tell you what I know.
Mayura and her father are practitioners of the Shinto religion. Miso is a Shinto priest and she's a Miko. They live in a Shinto shrine too.
Mayura's body would have been dressed in a plain white cotton or linenn kimono with the right flap over left. Left flap over right is for the living.
After the funeral her body would have been cremated. Her ashes would be placed inside a small urn then burried.
Even though Miso lives in a shrine he would still have a small shrine inside the house dedicated to deceased family members in the lveing room.
Her father would have a small mortuary tablet with her name written on it and have a photo of her. Since his wife is also dead, her photo and tablet would also be there.
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September 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I just saw the end of this anime in my country and I totally loved it and I must say I love your story too, and I really would like for you to please finish this fic, that is really great!!!
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January 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please, please continue
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Are you ever going to update this? You updated on FF.net, why not here? When is chapter 6 coming, I want more!
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August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm really just getting into Loki's anime. I plan to buy the manga too. I really like your story and can't wait to see what happens regarding Loki and Mayura. Such angst in the beginning of the story I'm sure it'll be very good. If you can let me know about updates my email is m0rlana@yahoo.com
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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohh... so sad... I read it on ff too. Poor Loki, he's absolutely devastated! Love the possessiveness though, I'm an uber fangirl for the 3Ps (1. Possessive, 2. Protective, 3. Predatory) Saw the first one in this which makes it go onto my alert list on ff! Update soon on both, it's an awesome story!
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay, another great chapter. I really like this fic. I can wait to see the next one, so update soon.
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, i really like this. I would have never thought about doing a fic like this. It was so sad, that murderer must pay. O and it was really sweet at the end of the last chapter when Loki cries for her. It brought a tear to my own eye. I really can't wait for the next one. Please update soon.