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for Upper Egypt

by scarychicks

person gabby
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this
is
the
best
damn
story
on
this
whole
website
person krupke
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Feeling hot hot hot. Oh my god, how come more people don't write hot hetero porn like this? I feel like an English teacher, but
damn, flowing style, great adjectives, a SEXY lemon for a goddamn change, and holy shit, a Trigun story about a guy screwing
a girl. I'm feeling faint. Have to go lie down now. And jerk off. 'Cause it's that hot.
person BarnabasFrid
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Brava Mouse! And for Fuck's sake I better not see any shit from your followers! A perfect royal bang here! Man and woman. One on one. And blood! What could be sweeter? Master and servent! Slapping! Yet none of that delicious rape and sick torture?
Well, I'm a sick fuck... I always miss that kind of stuff... But this was amazing, well written and just enough spice to make me squirm at my desk here at the office.

Mazel Tov!
person grenswench
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Exquisite torture! After what Wolfwood did to Meryl in B&D NC OOC, he had it coming to him. What better person to deal out the retribution than the gorgeous DOMinique? Evilmouse has a great knack for writing about the mental aspect of BDSM that makes it so tantalizing. ("And sex, Dominique understood, was ultimately about power. Who was on top, who was being penetrated, who got off first, and who was left bleeding.") It's not just what she does to him, it's how keenly he feels the pleasure of humiliation and submission. ("Quickly shutting his eyes, Wolfwood realized she had known he would react that way. He was playing right into her hands. The thought made him feel helpless and even more aroused.") Although what she does to him definitely got me twitching! Love the creative use of props (“Lie down on the gun.” - eeeee!!) but what really set me off was when she used the knife the rub the head of his cock. HOTTTTT!!!! Oh ruthless Dominique, you lucky bitch! The only thing worse than being in love with a hot anime man is being jealous of a hot anime woman. ARGH - heheh!

As always, evilmouse tops off the story with a dash a humor that shows that despite all the hotness and heaviness, it's all about FUN. FIVE STARS.

Thank you evilmouse for fulfilling my sick twisted anime fantasies =) Screw the naysayers - keep it up!!

Much respekt from your ardent fan <3

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