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schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like it so far please Ja NA
person Dyien
schedule February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*curls fists and attacks u* HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEY!!!!! NO FAIR!!!! u cant finish it at that!!!! like the story, luv the pairing (Tasuki is soooo HOT!)... ur doing gud, sso can u pls write more???
person V.M.
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice flow, a few spelling and grammer errors but lovely all the same. Please update soon, I find that I am hooked and can't wait for the next chapter to be uploaded!


~tacklehuggleglomps!~



V.M.
person valanthe
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
stupdi cliffhanger... now you have no choice, unless you write more I'll come and make you :P
or even better Tat-chan will... go away from you :P
no continuation = no more Tat-chan for you :)


good job, good fic, thank you for good story :)
person butterflysuki
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I can see what you mean about it being a filler episode. Overall I liked the first episode better, buut you did what all writers need to do, and that is to always leave them wanting more. AND I WANT MORE DARN IT!
person fylover_tasuki
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OHMY GODS such suspense i love the plot but oh you ended off on a badly suspenseful notee ohhhh plz finish...
person anime pixie
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
another great chpater. interesting ending! can't wait for the next chapter. good luck with the writing.
person Everqueen
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that is either tasuki or tamahome lol. I can't wait for the next chapter.
person gina
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
DAMN IT HURRY WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!! PPPPLLLLEEEEEAAAAASSSSSSEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!
person Kinnara
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. I really like it. Can you update soon? I would love to see more of your work.

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