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by Despina

person the soul
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it, really good....please keep going...
person BTDTGTT (Been there...)
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can't stand it. I HAVE NO CONTROL. (Hangs head in shame.)

I truly wasn't going to read this til the whole story was posted. Look how long THAT New Years Res lasted. Sigh.

Kyo and Hiro. Had to happen. Also, first pairing I've ever seen for Hiro that my gut and brain are totally cool with. Hiro's response to Kyo's advances is great. He's the one solid rock that is the foundation for all sanity in the actual series, and it's totally believable that he'd kiss then hold back. In his experience, sky-rockets are not necessarily the greatest foundation for a relationship. (i.e. what's happened with Shu and Yuki.)

I also really like the kaleidoscopic approach to story telling. Too much time overlap can make a story stale---generally it's better to keep the arrow of time moving forward... to choose the most effective VP for a given time period and pick up the alternate impressions in another segement--- but in this instance, these two chapters (combined with the same time sequence from Yuki's POV at the end of the last book) works very effectively. Mainly because you're handling the viewpoints so very well.

Did I mention I loved Kyo's VP? :D:D:D
person KaySan666
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*mwahaha* ...love it!!!!
person Nicole
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay can't wait for more, "Epics of Life" is my favorite gravi series ever! Well, besides the actual series.... you know what I mean!
person Gingitsune
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'm really glad that Kyo and Hiro might have something together. I love Kyo and really didn't want to see him hurt for long. BUt how about my other fav character, Ryo? I do hope that he will find some sort of peace or happiness. More? Oh! Happy new year!
person maazka
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!!! ive been looking so forward to you continuing, ureshii!!! kinda disapionted it was so Kyoshi-centric. but makes for a good segway. good on u girl!! keep it up!!! (god, im getting as bad as Kyo)
person luciology
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Towards the end of Realities of Life the angst was really getting to me. I was feeling really pissed at Shuichi for seeming to be so indicisive and I just wanted to castrate Kyo. This opening chapter is hopeful with Kyo's declaration that he knows Shu belongs to Eiri (and I certainly didn't see the set up coming). It's your story of course but I really hope it's not going to end like Casablanca, with Shu & Eiri going their seperate ways - not after all of this.
person Alethea!
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ello again! I love this series so much its insane! ^______^ In the begin of this series when we first met Kyosuke I really didnt like him at all...but now....I LOVE HIM! <33 He truly is a wonderful guy. I wish he and Shu would be together, but I would want to do that to poor Eiri ><. I love it when Kyo said "...Blonde-haired, mean-thing" or something like that. It was so funny to me! If you continue on with the KyoXHiro pairing, that would be nice ^^. Hiro needs to be with a calm caring guy like himself..... Keep up the awesome work! (This should become an anime, i swear XD) -Alethea<3
person the soul
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it thank-you for posting would love to read more...
person Alethea!
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
(last post got cut off, sorry!) Ello again! I love this series so much its insane! ^______^ In the begin of this series when we first met Kyosuke I really didnt like him at all...but now....I LOVE HIM! <33 He truly is a wonderful guy. I wish he and Shu would be together, but I would want to do that to poor Eiri ><. I love it when Kyo said "...Blonde-haired, mean-thing" or something like that. It was so funny to me! If you continue on with the KyoXHiro pairing, that would be nice ^^. Hiro needs to be with a calm caring guy like himself..... Keep up the awesome work! (This should become an anime, i swear XD) -Alethea<3

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