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Hee, this was cute and hot all at the same time. ^.^

oOo that was so good!! you should do more ryu/tat fics!! ur really good at them!

This was nice to read. Kuma is definitely going to need a bath. You have an occasional typo, but on the whole, your writing is good. As for Shuichi's payment, I think Eiri would want lots of sex from him in exchange for utter silence the rest of the time, but that's what Eiri always wants anyway. Maybe you should have Shuichi do something utterly disturbing, like actually learning how to cook, or drive a car, or something.

i think shuichi should offer to let yuki do bondage on him and riding crop and other fun toys

You need to look over your description line. You've got one option checked (racist) that certainly doesn't fit this story. Other than that, this is pretty good.