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July 20, 2019 at 12:00 AM
Plez update
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February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I'm sad it took me so long to look in this section and apparently you aren't writting this anymore. This was looking like a great story.
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January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very very cute story. =^-^= Glad you made it. Seems to be the only M/M one too... =( Oh well... I thank my lucky stars that there was at least this one. I do hope you continue.
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November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love this story! I never really thought of this pairing, though I like it. Your doing a great job and I'm so happy someone finaly made a Yaoi Vandread story. I love how your following the Anime's timeline and I love this Anime. I can't wait till you reach the later episodes. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay! i love your story! the first time i ever saw vandread at the end of the episode i remember thinking hibiki and duero would be great together....unfortunately they didn't seem to have much interaction throughout the series. thank you soooooo much for writing this!
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please please update!!!!
i love this so far.
i love this so far.
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October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and wold like to be informed when you update on any new chapters
thanks 4 this awesome story with a great plt and please hurry!
thanks 4 this awesome story with a great plt and please hurry!
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hope you update soon!
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Love the new chapter, warm fuzzies abound between the doc and our spitfire pilot. I can understand that you prefer book format to the mentioned format, my husband is actually writing a book as I type on our old laptop. We both love the anime, but my husband doesn't like yaoi, oh well, to each their own cup of tea...
What will be the reactions of the female crew, Dita, and Bart? And will it have repurcussions back on Tarak when they (Duelo McFile and Tokai Hibiki) return? In the anime, Meia and Hibiki do get close, but like as best friends do. Will the relationship have any bearing on Meia's view of Hibiki? And Gascone seems to support the doc in his pursuit of Hibiki, or so it seemed from the previous chapter.
Can hardly wait to see what happens next!
What will be the reactions of the female crew, Dita, and Bart? And will it have repurcussions back on Tarak when they (Duelo McFile and Tokai Hibiki) return? In the anime, Meia and Hibiki do get close, but like as best friends do. Will the relationship have any bearing on Meia's view of Hibiki? And Gascone seems to support the doc in his pursuit of Hibiki, or so it seemed from the previous chapter.
Can hardly wait to see what happens next!
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
this is the first Vandread yaoi I've found! Great job! I really like the plot (total mpreg junkie that I am), and interesting interactions between characters.
What you might want to do is define your writing a bit more, umm...like format with spaces between the actual dialogue and descriptives. It makes reading
easier and it also gives you a new perspective when going over your story. This could also carry over into putting a space between the paragraphs, easier to handle the story especially if you have a beta-reader.
Example:
The beta sends your story back after looking it over and writes, "I really like how the plot is unfolding, but the medic bay scene, pg 2 paragraphs 2 thru 4, needs to be cleaned up a bit more."
Once again, great job and I really hope to see more!
this is the first Vandread yaoi I've found! Great job! I really like the plot (total mpreg junkie that I am), and interesting interactions between characters.
What you might want to do is define your writing a bit more, umm...like format with spaces between the actual dialogue and descriptives. It makes reading
easier and it also gives you a new perspective when going over your story. This could also carry over into putting a space between the paragraphs, easier to handle the story especially if you have a beta-reader.
Example:
The beta sends your story back after looking it over and writes, "I really like how the plot is unfolding, but the medic bay scene, pg 2 paragraphs 2 thru 4, needs to be cleaned up a bit more."
Once again, great job and I really hope to see more!