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December 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
GAME OVER
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
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September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
God he didn't need to die!
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December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well.... it'd be nice if you put in more chapters..... that's about it, oh, and I have no idea if it was skirt or shirt because you screwed up the wording up a bit on that
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December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dude! When r u gonna update this fic?! It's killin me, the suspense. Come on, this fic is 2 good 2 leave alone. Hurry up already!
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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey man thats a good story, if i were you i would wright a short sequal ether about motokos greff or katiora living ether way it would be really good.
P.S. My spelling sucks as you can see.
P.S. My spelling sucks as you can see.
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February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOOOO please write more, Keitaro's such a klutz there's no way he could hit the mark like that and just end it all... please don't let this end in tragedy. :'(
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Is there gonna be more of this? I'd love to see more.
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOO KEITAROS LIKE DEAD!! NOOOOO LET HIM LIVE MANNNNN!!!! (somehow miracuisoly even doh when stabbed in the heart)
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woah, I'm left a little speechless. I knew something would go wrong but I was not expecting it to go that wrong. A riveting read and is there any way for Keitaro to survive and deal with the aftermath?
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW. I mean Wow. this story left my heart pounding. I... wow that is all I have to say. That is a good ending by the way don't mess with it, even do I would like to see this continued. It is perfect the way it is.