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I really like this! I would love for u to add chapters-more hot lemony goodness-plus maybe a little thawing of Jin?! Keep up the great work!!

:::“What’s it a question of? Huh?” Mugen asked, pleased with the effect he was having. He ran his fingers through the other’s dark hair at last tangling his fingers in it and pulling Jin’s head back, exposing long neck. Mugen attacked, licking and nipping; he was so absorbed in his task that he didn’t notice Jin was moving, until he found himself sailing through the air and hitting the ground with enough force to knock the wind from him. Jin was on top of him a moment later, keeping him pinned, and kissing him with an almost frightening passion. Mugen struggled, trying to return the kiss and breathe at the same time. :::

That was my favorite part!!!Great description! I think this was really hot. They were IC, Mugen a little out just because i think he would curse more often and he was a bit too sweet towards Jin, but not much at all. Jin the most ic i think just because i would see him the type to walk away from Mugen even after they had sex lol..he has his pride and he is also a little bit more closed up in himself. Please continue on!

To the other reviewer who said they didn't like them having sex while they were around a bunch of died bodies there...well they didn't actually have sex on the field, but near the creek, so in my opinon, i dont see a problem. ^_^

So that's new. And cute. :)

WOW! That was hot! Jin seemed a little strange though. I know! Why don't you write a second chapter...and a third...and a forth...and a ugh you get the picture. Great Story. Well written.

I loved it... I always like fics with Mugen on bottom better, for some reason. Well, I'm not much for words at the moment, but good job, and I can't wait for another fic!

Yep - That's how it would happen, unless of course Fuu was watching and started screaming or something but guess that would be a different story.

nicely done! a really enjoyable read. keep up the great work!

kimper :)

I wanted some tobacco after reading that one...and I quit over a year ago too! Very nice. Short and sweet.

Very good fic. well written. And I agree about the show so 10 extra points for the Latin. Good work , try and give use some more.

Hey, I just checked your profile. Young lady, preytell *why* are you over here writing Jin/Mugen smut when you're supposed to be drawing Jin/Mugen smut? Get back to your easel NOW! (cracks whip!) OK, I'm just kidding :-) Again, really nice job. Hope to see more from you...