rate_review Reviews

are you going to update anytime soon? this is a great story and it has a potential to be spectacular. i hope you update so that i can find out excatly what's going on with the men targeting karou, who saitou's friend is and what's going to happen between karou and saitou. i'm praying that you haven't abandoned your story.

Wow, a saitou and kaoru fic and a very good one. Hope you update soon. Until next time, take care, and god bless.

please update as soon as u can i wanna know whats going to happen next so as soon as u can please update and when u do please email me to let me know. Ja Mata Airy

This was really good! I really enjoyed reading it just because I love Saito. I'm a huge fan of kenshinxkaoru, though, so I was surprised I liked it.

~Tera

Great fic, it's different but cool i like it very interesting! ^_^

This story is great! I like how the tension is building up in the stroy, and it will be interesting to see how Kouro feels when Kenshin returns. So on with the chapter soon please!

hurry up with the next chappie! i'm so tired of that baka rurouni, anyway. he doesn't deserve a sweet girl like kaoru.

Personally, I dont think anything is wrong with your story, and I dont think you should change it. Too many people changing their storys around, its pretty stupid to write a story, post the story and then freaking take it all down so that the reader becomes annoyed because they have to read it all over again. Seriously, if someone redid their story and then put it back up, I would just go to the chapter I left off at, and then I would be completely lost if they had changed things around. There were however, alot of things I liked about this story. Characters for one thing, im sure you got some of their atitude from the show/movie/whatever, but I'll bet you put some of your own stuff into how they acted, and I like how they act with eachother, you know pissed and then the next thing you know they fantasise about eachother. Second thing I like would be the length of the chapters, I love it when people make nice long chapters, so its like a real story and doesnt seem to rushed. And last is the fact that I couldnt find too many typo's so it wasnt that bad. ^_^ Anyways, when you move and you get your computer all set up again, email me... I am truely excited to read more. My email is DemonMina@yahoo.com. Write me when the next chapter is put out.

I can't believe I have miss this story. Great job. It a well-written Saitou and Kaoru pairing. Look forward to next chapter. Hope everything comes out ok with your move. Until next time, take care, and god bless.

I'm enjoying where you're going with this story. Please continue!