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Nice writing! Superior to most fanfics I read, especially lemons ^___^ I like it that you kept the character not too OOC, and it was sweet. Keep going!

Very very well written. Loved it (:


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very well done. i can so see that happening in the story!

Hi, I was reading your fic and it's really good! However, I think the lemon was too short. Either that or I'm just really reading way too many lemons. Anyways it's such a great fic, and good luck with Hatsumi's point of view. Writing fics from a person's point of view can be hard since you need to keep everything from that person's view. The best I can do is one chapter, but yeah. I'd be honoured if you could read my fic and leave a review. I'm in the mist of posting some new chapters up.