rate_review Reviews

very good! more please! :)

update pretty please ;3

^^ i like this kind of stories.

haoxlyserg pawns!

love it though please hurry up with the next chapter?

wow such an interesting story neh..
i love lyserg's descriptions, it makes him look more beautiful XD
and the first chapter was very smooth.. and calm, the story flow is really good.
hope it gets updated and finished :(

Ei!! Could you continue this story. This is the first LysergHao that I have read so far.

Oh this seems really good! can't you write another charapter?pleeeeease

actually im kinda interested in finding out were all the other characters from the series fit into all this. not that the current characters aren't smexy as all gothic hell but there are the bone of the story and it just wont tast good until we get some meat on it. and please, dont make all of yoh's crew on the same side as he. lets split them up put em togethere and split them again! rinse and repeat!

I love the story so far!!!!!!!! I wonder.... What will his little brother say about his new angel? Is his brother even Yoh in this story?? I hope so. I hope the two of u writing this are good friends who knowwhat the other is thinking or think alike, or this story may go in all sorts of strange ways and make no since. I've seen it happen to writing pairs before, and I hope it dosent happen to u two. I'm also happy to see a first chapter to a story that isnt only 50 words. You did a great job, and I hope ur buddy is as good as u. I would now say please up date soon.... but I guess its not up to u now is it? Chapter2 is your partners..... O well.... Heres hoping to a good chapter 2!

EEEEEEEEEEKKKKKKK!!! My favorite pairing!!!!!! HAOXLYSERG!!!!^^; Very cute!! Hope you guys update soon!! *waits patiently*