rate_review Reviews

Truly delightful reading here. I know you asked for constructive criticism, but I\'m not good at pointing out flaws unless I see them clear. And I enjoyed this fic too much for this. I especially liked the characterization of Brad (where normally, I\'m a Schuldig fan), so cold and composed, without that blatant OCCness one is forced to use on occasions to fit his personality in a yaoi story. And for some reason, maybe it would be obvious for another, but for me, it was really thrilling to find out how Brad was going to restore Schuldig\'s mind after the fever. I truly didn\'t guess, but often wondered, not finding an answer that (as I said), maybe for others was predictable, but not for me. I loved this story, thank you very much for uploading it here.

Best Weiss Kreuz fic I\'ve ever read and with my fav couple too! Can\'t wait to read the rest ^_~

Crawford/Schu are my favorite pairing and you write them so well. Crawford\'s vision at the end was such a tease, so I am glad you wrote a sequel.

This was nice. I especially liked this part: "And if sometimes, standing in the nothingness of his dreams, he felt a phantom hand in his own, it didn't matter." I also like the way you ended this chapter. You are going on with this, I hope?