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I enjoyed this chapter very much. I liked how Mousse was amused with Ranma's confession, the firsts, and that the surgery is now underway. Now all we can do is wait to see the results. Hopefully everything will turn out well. Oh, and it was very convenient that Mousse ended up having an appointment when Shampoo had finally found his location LOL!

Why do I always find myself reviewing this story and never your gw story. I love them both but I never seem to remember to review the other. Oh well just so you know I loved the update of Alone. This chapter was nice too. I loved the way you had all the firsts listed it was cute and I don't think blind people are less lovavle also!
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This is a very good story. Mousse has always been one of my favorite from this show with Ranma. I like how you are taking the time to establish a relationship between the two instead of jumping right into it. Hopefully everyone will be able to raise the money and Mousse will be able to enjoy many more sunrises and sunsets with Ranma. I look forward to more chapters from you and good luck with your writing!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!

Nice story. While I can´t agree with your views on Shampoo (she´s one of my favorite characters), I DO agree that Mousse (who happens to be another of my favorite characters--but I can´t stand Mousse/Shamppo pairings) need more fanfics out there. I was really happy to have found this fic when browsing through the Ranma ones. Shonen ai, you said this would be? A pairing with Ranma? Hmm, nice, I don´t mind that pairing at all--it´s sorta rare, though. I love rare pairings. I´ll keep a tab on this story.

It´s well written, and I think that the plot is really good. I don´t mind Shampoo being portrayed as a dumb, selfish girl--after all, it´s your story, and there always has to be *something* to make Mousse fall out of "love" with her. *smile* Keep on writing! Hm... can´t really think of anything especially constructive to say...you´ll just have to make do with my wholehearted encouragement of your writing.

Laia

update soon!

Oooh, wow, you *do* update fast. Kudos! Such short, sweet chapters. ;D Keep it up, I'm lovin' it! (More than I've ever loved fast food, augh!)

this is a cute story so far. I'm looking forward to reading more of it.

Holy crap, you update fast! And woo, new chapter... for me? Awww. Maybe I'll draw ya some fanart. ;D (maybe. I'm really unreliable when it comes to stuff like that, haha.) Anyway, wow, this story is going in a totally different direction than I expected. ...Cool! Eager to see what you have poor Mousse do next, heh. *thumbs up and such*

I like how in this story Mousse finally is able to see himself and the others clearly, although it is sad that it takes impending blindness for that to happen. I look forward to more chapters in this story.