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I have an odd feeling the author likes writing about quicksand.............

I know that real quicksand dose not suck people over their heads.
Science has proven that many times.
But what everybody has to understand is that even though the stories I write may be unrealistic or do not make much sence in the real world, to tell you the truth. Pokemon don't exist, but that dose not stop us writing about them?
All I ask is for people just to enjoy my stories. I don't mind if people say that I make stories that are unrealistic, that is what story writing is about. Being creative.
The way I like to write about quicksand is of the more fictional and deadly method and the fantasy of being sucked down to your death. That is why I love to write that sort of story.
Even my other story Misty's snake hug, snakes don't hypnotise people and they can't swallow an adult.

But how can I make a story interesting and full of suspence if I have to restrain myself to reality, if Nintendo did that, they would not have been such a great videogaming company and games like Mario and Zelda wold not have existed. All we would have is games like grand theft Auto where we have to steal and run away from the cops, or nead for speed where we race but we have the annoying cops chase after us because we are going at high speeds that would kill somebody.
Or crime shows like CSI and that. They are about reality or stories based on reality in forensic science.

What I like is fantasy and the power of imagination, I know it may be unreal or unbelieveable but that is the idea.

Thanks for reading too.

You kept mentioning "real quicksand." What you described is not "real quicksand." Killer quicksand was created by the movie industry. In real, honest-to-goodness quicksand, which is caused by water seeping into the sand from below (which, by the way, discredits the idea of finding it on a beach, as water on a beach comes from above) you hit bouyancy at around your chest. You are 70% water, while the quicksand is maybe 25% water. You can only sink so far before your natural bouyancy keeps you afloat.

(Note: i know this a poorly organized piece of shit story that sums up my lame kids show fantasy but please bear with me)

WHAT THE FUCK WAS THAT!? IT MADE NO SENSE!? XD thanks for the laugh pffft

Dude, what the heck?! How come all your stories have to do with quicksand?! Let's have some originality!

actually, it is kind of original. after all no one else is doing it!

much better, mainly because they lived! but, whether dead or alive, if i had a good time, then you can surely write.