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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure why everyone is being so mean to you. It really wasn't that bad.
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You did a great job on this chapter. I love the pairing, I think they are so cute together. Good stuff!
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just terrible.
Get a clue about your poor writing skills and learn to write before posting again.
And stop with the stupid lame excuses as to why your writing is so bad.
Get a clue about your poor writing skills and learn to write before posting again.
And stop with the stupid lame excuses as to why your writing is so bad.
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please learn to spell before writing. Please. Or at least get a beta reader. I don't know how old you are but your English skills are sub-par and your spelling is worse than an elementry student. If you ARE an elementry student than I'm sorry for this review, but PLEASE get an older person to help you. Try to wade through bad spelling and grammer is a huge headache.
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*dances* He he I love it....that is really good chapter...thank-you for posting would love to read more...
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not Bad but the cough in the middle even though explained was unnerving. not a bad start but try something else for the cough stuff.
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I thought this was very pointless and stupid (no offense). I didnt get the random coughing in the middle of a sentence when there was no dialogue. Maybe its just me but i think u should rewind and try writing it over and then maybe add a little common sence to it.
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it, it is a good start please keep going...would love to read more...