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Very nice! Romantic, steamy, yet not too over-the-top. Great work!

w00t~!
I had to hold back a fit of girlish laughter so I wouldn't scare my mum xD!
Good job, sounds like a useful thing..the spell of soundless and spiffy DO NOT DISTURB stuffies :D

w/♥

.:D:.

This is a very well writen and cute, hot story! I'm glad that I read it.

Nice!

Nice Flow in the story, a little over done with the language, but still really good. Just a note a sequal would be really nice say starting the next morning or so. As it is your decision so do with it as you please. Peace Out

I was so happy to find a good Ah! My Goddess story. This is the first one I've found that is about Bell and K and pretty much keeps them in character. This was a great story, I only wish you wrote others. I would read any Ah! My Goddess story you write.

Lexi AKA Bubble-chan

Well, somewhere in oblivion, Celestine just shuddered and has broken out in a cold sweat. The only thing possibly OOC was Bel in nothing but the apron, and not being at all nervous about it, because you know she would have been thinking to herself, 'What if K isn't ready for this?'.

Having said that, I also wish you had delved more deeply into Belldandy's time of bliss (I agree with Jocko's review in that vein). It's just got to be better for a goddess, I'm thinking.

Having written all that, this was very, very sweet, you have talent, and please write more.

Ja ne.

W.

Not bad. :)

It could have used more in the actual sex act, but it's always sweet to read about Keiichi and Belldandy finally getting some time alone.

that was good.

I loved it! Good work on the story, I think you hit the personalities perfectly, well except for urd buying her own ice cream lol. Any ways good job and its about time somebody made a oh my goddess fanfic.