rate_review Reviews

I don't know what you’re on about. Goku seemed pretty in character to me and I have no idea how much more refine you could be. The only complaint that I have was that it was too short. And this chapter definitely explained why it was Goku was naked in Gojyo's bed, properly, because at first glace it didn't really make sense but, reading this, it was quiet logical now.

And it’s just like Goku to see who’s in love with who; however when it comes down to himself he seems completely clueless.

I’m glad to see you still writing, I was afraid that for a moment you had discontinued “teaching Goku”.

I really like this story. When will there be more?

I love this story... I had a similiar idea, but with less sex. I might still write it, but probably not.
I think it would be awful for Sanzo, though, knowing that even though he wants Goku, Goku's with GOJYO of all people... that would really suck for him.
One mistake, though, Sanzo doesn't smoke Winstons, he smokes Marlboros. It's awful that I just know that off the top of my head....
_melissa

Not as good as the orginal but then it's not really a story right? Hehe still really love it though and hope you do one of these for everything chapter of Teaching Goku. I like having the different persepectives and I'm glad I'm finally getting some Hakkai. Er....I mean I wish I was getting some of Hakkai *heh heh* but I love that I'm finding out what and how he thinks! Please keep this up!!

I liked it. But Hakkai's thoughts were a little confusing. I do believe he has the most mental problems out of the whole group but it's hard for me to imagine his thoughts like that,plus I had no clue what the little voice was talking about. I sort of understood but for the most part I felt a little lost which prevented me from fully enjoying the other things that happened in the story. I still loved it though. If you write more I will most certainly read it.

You evil evil person. -.- And you wonderful WONDERFUL person :D one the one hand, now I have ANOTHER fic to check up on, but on the other....it's yours, AND it's part of Teaching...you're evil, and I love you:) The way you wrote Hakkai is just...wow. I like it. a LOT.

~Angel

Another tantalising slice of the other point of view! I look forward to many more such "Bits and Pieces"

I can't say I agree with your interpretation of the characters, but it'd be interesting to watch what you make of it nevertheless =) [Nevermind me. I don't think Hakkai to be a difficult character either^^]

Brilliant!!!!!! What an idea to go at it for the other characters pov. I love this. I loved teaching Goku and this is so interesting and will really be good I am sure. You write a very good story and carry the ideas so well. Can't wait until next chapter!!!!

heh. that was damned entertaining. i absolutely love seeing the chapters like this. now excues me while i got and read the second chapter of TG again. ^__^