schedule
October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
um...okay??????...so anyways, what the hell was that?! all it told me was that you have a lot of mistakes to fix and that Akito is one bossy S.O.B. so far, i can't tell if i like it or not, since theres not much to this story.
schedule
January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
are you stating that akito is a guy for the purposes of this fic, or that akito is a guy in general?
if it's the latter i'd suggest this site http://ume.silent-hope.net/sohma.shtml#rin
if it's the latter i'd suggest this site http://ume.silent-hope.net/sohma.shtml#rin