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Hope you write more soon. Waiting to see it.

hey great story hope to see an update from you. I like the new Jessie I think I know what Delia is going to ask Jessie. Will she be marrying Ash in the future. But I am not sure cuz Ash started when he was 10 right. Now he is Doing the Johto or Hoenn League.

continu its greath

Uh oh! Delia's about to start trouble lol. But how far will she go?
Anyway good work on this chapter. Look forward to the next one.

Nice... Lemme know when you upadte please

Looking good! I really don't see why anyone would think Ash giving away a pokemon he just caught would be bad. I'm sure he's even away some before. If he had already been training it I can see why he might hesitate but he had just met this one. And Jessie finnaly got some action with Ash, too bad he doesn't know about it lol.

Anyways keep up the great work.

This story it great! Keep up the good work. Ash\Jessie pairings are rare too.

I say go for it! Although any spelling or grammatical errors you may of had in the four parts of the Exile didn't take from how sublime your story is. Also, the Jessie/Ash paring is unusual---as you probably already know---and it definitely adds to the story. When I read all of 'Exile' a couple months, I was a bit disappointed that you hadn't updated for while, but now I'm happy that you've taken a renewed interest in revising it. You've inspired me to get going on my own fanfic ideas that have been floating in my brain for almost five years. Happy Writing!

~Akewataru & Akehanaeru~