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Yummy as usual! :D I was quite happy to see this update. Sorry it took me so long to get here!

Brava. I was excited, as always, to see a new chapter. ^_^ I'm sorry you're working so much. I can relate. But thank you for find some time to update such a great story!

This is one that I actually know by name and will read over and over when nothing new or nothing that strikes me as being well-written is around. So, kudos!

Wow! Just wow... That was hot. My guy probably wouldn't have the guts to make love to me outside... LOLZ... Anyways Kenren is too sweet doing all that for Tenpou... Are you going to continue this story? It's been awhile. I miss you updating....

oh my.

I just found this and honestly, can't find any constructive criticism, just wiping drool off the keybaord. Please tell me there will be more?

Wish AFF had a notification thing like ff did.

"He got them just for you."

hahaha, suuree he did. XD

Nice chapter.

Hooray, a threesome. I hadn't reviewed yet but I was secretly chomping at the bit for one. Thanks for that one. The story so far is enjoyable to read, and I especially like the little character bits you throw in here and there (i.e., Konzen v. Kenren's views on spending the evening this way). :)

A bit of fun and writing practice is why any of us who write fanfiction should be writing fanfiction.

Another wonderful update. I thank you. ^_^

*hums happily* I get so giddy when I see you've updated. :P

This was lovely little moment to watch between Tenpou and Kenren. It is good to see Konzen taking the 'lesson' to heart. Poor Goku. :(

:D hahahahahaha, that'll teach him for taking wine without asking. :P

I feel so sorry for Konzen! Not only is he sexually deprived, he is robbed of his plum wine too! X'D It doesn't sound that good, I wonder... Does it exist in reality, plum wine?

But I think like that too, like Konzen, that Tenpou is a bossy bottom. (and those two words are wonderful together, sounds like a childrens game!) Still, it is fun seeing that Tenpou is so wanted by everyone! XD I mean, yeah, I can understand why. He is hot, and smart, and super hot... But they should go by Konzen's office and give him some strawberries too. ...now I want strawberries. Haven't had it for years! (but strawberry ice cream isn't that good, really.)

Okay, anyway. I love this chapter as much as I love this whole story! I mean, you really manage to capture their personalities and put them into words. It's so awesome, I need to envy you a bit now. *envies* Okay, done. Almost... And actually, this whole voyeur thing somehow fits Konzen very good. Because it gives him a change to indulge himself in this whole pleasure-thing without letting anyone else know... Almost. And how sweet (horny) Kenren is and drags out Tenpou from his library... Nyah~! It just makes me so happy to read your fics.

Wow! Just wow! I wish I could have a pair of boots like Tenpou! But my partner would never care. Anyways! GREAT JOB!!! As always! I bet Kenren was happy for no more books jabbin' him the butt... at least for now. Then again he probably didn't even notice. I can't wait for your next chapter!