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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, you can't kill a main character thats just wrong, unless... you're gonna bring suzuka back some how??? HMMMMMMMMMMMMM.... can't wait for more, by the way... WHERE THE HELL IS AISHA IN ALL OF THS??? She immortal right, she could done something, oh well it's your story you write what you want, looking forward to more.
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just... wow... it's just... wow. How the f*** can you write that well??? I mean dammit, it took me forever to finally get into my writing style, and you did it over night!! But.... yeah, keep writing it.... jerk... ^_^ jk
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is pretty amazing stuff! Update again please, this is very promising!
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't want to rewrite to review again but you got it. MEOW! PURRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Write more. You're good.