rate_review Reviews

That was a let down. I was rooting for the snake.

This is a very good story. I am told that you once had another story on this site about Ash and Misty making love in quicksand, but it isn't here. Do you think you could place it here again? I wanna see it.

So Misty and Ash become husband and wife. That is something we all saw coming but one question? How come the snake was so predatory to the woman and it was going to eat Misty 2 before and it succeeded but Ash saved her but then he damn near died then Agent Moldwo aka Mewtwo saved them all right. What is next for the two young couple and the newlyweds. Hopefully no more Carnivorous Pythondas out there

Well, there is no plan yet for a sequel Josh as all my stories just have Ash and Misty in different situations. You can say that they lived happily ever after without ever knowing that there was a hungry snake trying to eat them. Mewtwo had erased their memories of being eaten so it was like it was all a dream for Ash and Misty. (Just like the first movie)

I always like to portray Ash and Misty before they propose or confess their love because it is soo much better I belive when you have that sort of young love, the kind we all dream about at one stage in our lives.

Oh and your question about the Pythonda being so preditory with the women was like, it eats humans but before it tried to eat Misty, it never knew how to arouse them and hypnotize them.
Then as Misty started moaning as the pythonda was wrapping itself around her in the tree in the second chapter, Misty was dreaming of Ash...as explained again in more detail in the 4th part
(in the 3rd chapter entry)
The pythonda gained the knowlage it can hypnotize its victims as it was a psychic pokemon and has the ability to control ones mind.
It's something that comes with the suspense and drama I try to portray in this story.

Plus as you might have read Misty had a thing about being wrapped up like she explained to Ash when they were in the mud bath.
(Sorry if anybody thinks this is bizzare but this is a reflection of my own imagination that inspires me for this type of storywriting with snakes, quickand and other things, I hope no body thiks of this as strange because this is only a fantasy for me.

Well...time to go

An interesting tale, sir. And I'm guessing "Moldwo" and "Sally" were plays on "Mulder" and "Scully"? Hehheh... Laters.

You are the first one to notice it. And you are spot on.
Oh and for those who have got the slow dial up, I have added an extra chapter of the 5th part for those who's dial up had trouble loading the complete ending.

thanks for letting me know. while it's sad what happened to nurse joy, i'm glad misty and ash confessed and this was still a great story. i look forward to reading more work by you!

that's definitely different! update soon!

WHATS WITH YOU AND QUICKSAND?! ARE U OBSESSED?!! GEEZ!!

good story so far. hope you update soon