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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fucking fantastic
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A dazzling finale, Jet! Very steamy, well written, the split perspective worked well here. Looking forward to more from you. Thanks so much for sharing this!
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love these sorta chats between the younger teammates...especially when Ken is a little bit slow...
That was a hilarious chapter, and I most definately am looking forward to the next...
and the next...
and so on and so forth...: )
Kisses and cookies!
That was a hilarious chapter, and I most definately am looking forward to the next...
and the next...
and so on and so forth...: )
Kisses and cookies!
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*opens doors and windows and turns on fan* WOW that was hot!! And awesome! I think your back-and-forth went fine, loved the counterpoint of the heat and sweetness. Well done! Now write something else. ;)
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
I belong to the Youji x Aya group and I do not know what happened where this little gem didn\'t land in my mailbox, but am so glad I sought you out here.
Lovely addition to the story, cute touches with the insight into Ken and Omi. I love how you\'ve managed to keep the story teetering between humorous and hot. I look forward to the coming conclusion.
Again, beautifully done.
I belong to the Youji x Aya group and I do not know what happened where this little gem didn\'t land in my mailbox, but am so glad I sought you out here.
Lovely addition to the story, cute touches with the insight into Ken and Omi. I love how you\'ve managed to keep the story teetering between humorous and hot. I look forward to the coming conclusion.
Again, beautifully done.
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*BOWS*
If I had a candle handy, I would so light it for you - this is sooooo hot.
Man...could you give me tips on how to write a lemon?!
All of mine turn out like crap - one of the reasons I haven't posted them.
I need a cold shower and some tissues for my nose...
If I had a candle handy, I would so light it for you - this is sooooo hot.
Man...could you give me tips on how to write a lemon?!
All of mine turn out like crap - one of the reasons I haven't posted them.
I need a cold shower and some tissues for my nose...
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh, you just get better! I am loving this, every chapter I love it more. What a treat!
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story and I think you're doing an unbelievable job with it! You've captured all of the boys very well and the dialogue is outstanding, very human. I'm very anxious for the reunion!
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent, oh my, this is excellent! Eager for more, loving your take on Aya!
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, dear Lord! I just found this series today and I am hooked. PLEASE! I need more! This is worse than crack! I like how you totally seem to have everyone in character! Very good job! I am loving every bit of it and will wait with baited breath for the next installment. (soon I hope!)