rate_review Reviews

I posted a reply in the yahoo group, but thought I'd put something here too :^D This is really well written and flows smoothly. The scenes are easy to visualize in my head as I read along, and I'm thrilled it is more than a PWP sexual romp. Not that PWP's aren't good too, it's just that I tend to like it more when there is a story with the sex *grin* Looking forward to the next update.

Utterly delightful! Its wonderful to have a story in which Aya is the careful campaigner to convince Yohji to have a relationship -- and you've beautifully captured how Aya would apply the same care and determination to that campaign that Aya applies to all his missions. Seeing the more relaxed and humorous Aya that was hinted at in Gluhen and Side B is terrific. I really enjoy the humor, phrasing, and careful attention to the characters. The last chapter was not so full of coincidents that I failed to be submerged fully in the story -- to the contrary, I felt Yohji's, Aya's and Omi's frustration, and relief when Aya was willing to relax a bit from full Abyssian mode to say farewell to Yohji. Very nice touch in his observation that Omi wanted to talk to him. I'm anxious for more.

Waaahhhh! Nooooo!!!! MORE!!!!

More, More! Faster!

(as in write more faster...not whatever else it sounds like...)

Yay *claps hands* I just love slutty Aya, not Aya who's all repressed with a 10ft pole up his butt! You've done a fantastic job with the characters, squee!!!!! LOL. Anyway I love it and excitedly await more :) *sigh* Aya and Yohji makes me drool! Oki-day, please keep up the good work, I bow to your superiority at making Yohji and Aya sooooo HOT together, goodbye, I'm loving you!!!!!

YAY!
oooh nice chapter - but I hope Ken notices Omi and leaves his thoughts about Aya alone!
*hands over cookies*
Faster!

This is such a satisfying story! I loved reading it. Thanks so much for publishing it. You hit all the high spots of a good old-fashioned Catch Me If You Can sort of get-together story and hit them all perfectly. It was amusing and easy to read and the sex scenes were bleeding-from-the-eyes good!

"Aya poured into the arms of a man, allowing himself to be momentarily caught. Big, muscled arms pulled him close and he rested his chin on one wide shoulder. He opened violet cat eyes and immediately focused on Yohji. Even across the room, Yohji felt the heat of it, the promise. The plea. The demand. “/Come and get me/.” " --- Very, very classic and very, very well done! Absolutely perfect. Thanks again so much for publishing this.

Really enjoyed this story - thank you! The boys are very hot!

Mmmm...Delicious - Hey! what the hell are you doing reading reviews!? You should be writing the next chapter!!!

oh, I'm enjoying this... Come on, Yohji, chance of a lifetime slipping by!