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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was a little cliche, but overall I really liked it! I think you did good not making Yuki too OOC and I liked the crazily cavorting shuichi. I also liked how you characterized his behavior. Great job, can't wait to see the next story from you!
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You captured a simple story line and turned it into something truly amazing. That was an awsome and beautifully written story. Good job. Ja
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So very very sweet. I've always seen Yuki as a good guy trying to get out and you made it happen. Good job!
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very nice.
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was really good. I love the way yuki found out he wasnt the badass he thinks he is. I have always known that he was mush inside. Not to say I dont like his crusty exterior. You did a good job. congrats!
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was really sweet. Made me smile.
Good job ^^
Good job ^^
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was absolutely adorable. I hope you keep writing more Gravitation stories! ^___^
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was sweet! Bittersweet, but sweet! I really liked it!! Good message!
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
shu is adorable