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March 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I do have to agree with the person above me that this story was pretty bad. Hell, I didn\'t even finish it because I just couldn\'t go on in all the errors, slutty actions, and t3h ooc\'ness of it all. But I do agree that it was just funny as piss!! I was literally laughing the whole time I was reading it, either by how horrible this was to the actual content that I actually caught. But j00 were right, I wouldn\'t have wanted to read it again if I had written this. xD But at least people get fanservice from Kyone, which usually doesn\'t happen often at all...>.> And that was a major redeeming factor in it.
-Narshe Delvar-
-Narshe Delvar-
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Unfortunately you were right, it was bad
+ Mihoshi
+ Very funny when it actually made sense
- Didn't make sense very often
- At times I found myself thinking that there were more authors notes than actual literature in this fic.
- yoose ah speltchekkir
- Russians are from Earth, not from space, I've had therapy to prove that this is true.
You get a C average, the saving grace was that it was so bad that it was funny, and also, you carried the main idea forward through the miresome bog of authors notes.
+ Mihoshi
+ Very funny when it actually made sense
- Didn't make sense very often
- At times I found myself thinking that there were more authors notes than actual literature in this fic.
- yoose ah speltchekkir
- Russians are from Earth, not from space, I've had therapy to prove that this is true.
You get a C average, the saving grace was that it was so bad that it was funny, and also, you carried the main idea forward through the miresome bog of authors notes.