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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. This is amazing. I can't wait to read the next part.
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yippee!!! It's finally here!
Gripping start. Darker and more sombre that what I have expected but beautiful nonetheless. Waits eagerly for the next instalmant.
Gripping start. Darker and more sombre that what I have expected but beautiful nonetheless. Waits eagerly for the next instalmant.
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was really ingenius and I loved how you put her turning. Loving but not sappy. Integral\'s reactions felt very real to me, her nervousness yet determination.
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think this is working up to be one of my favorites. I agree in that some vampire sex game would have been a bit too cliche. Great work I think you are one of a few who strive to keep these two in character.