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February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice ^^
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You have got to be the best fan fic writer I've EVER come across. I forgot I was reading for a long time. All the details were there and the ending was absolutly perfect. Please please write some more. I'm so glad that yaoiwench121 told me about you!
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I very much enjoyed this fic. Good writing and really hot sex ^_^
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful work, one of the best Loveless fics I came across. Beautifully written and amazingly detailed characterization. It was a pleasure to see our beloved characters come to life once again. You’ve done a great job, thank you ^.^
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ack! i just realized how disjointed my review sounded! i misspelled disjointed and the confusing part at the end of the review was meant to say i really can't wait to see what you write next!
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Overall, you did a great job - this was better written with more thought that many AFF stories! However, I think you were a bit heavy handed with the 4 years as you kept pounding it into your readers. The smut was ok, I could have used some more descriptions given it was their first time but still you did a good job! thanks for posting!
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was good! yey Ritsuka and Soubi! they finally got "it" on! hehe Natsuo and Youji are so awesome...hehe that was funny about the fake ears...and poor Kio....lol very good. Their whole "first" time was so sweet and cute...hehe and awkward at times but sweeeet...yey!
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow. i'm almost speechless. i'm trying to think of words to describe how beautiful this was. your descriptions were wonderful and you characterized them both so nicely, keeping them ic. everything flowed so perfectly, no dijointed jumps to distract you from the storyline. you're very talented. i really can't wait to see what read next. :)
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AH! That was AMAZINK! So AMAZINK that it the word AMASING isn't worthy! I loved every aspect of this! Heheh, espcially the ending! That was cute!
FANTASTICAL! *Salutes you* I hope you write more Loveless stories in the future!!!
~Lee
FANTASTICAL! *Salutes you* I hope you write more Loveless stories in the future!!!
~Lee