rate_review Reviews

Well then, here's some advise: Don't like it? Don't read it. Jerk.

that story creeped me out. Incest digusts me alot. As much as I love lemons and I don't go for that. Ya that's all

Overall, you've got a nice story here. However, a few bits and pieces do drag it down a bit.
The -chan honorific is usually reserved for girls. Only very close friends would use the -chan honorific for a male.
Baka is really more closely translated as 'clueless idiot' rather than silly.

Hey, genius. If I don't read it, I can't know that it's polluted with nonsensical, inane, pointless fangirl Japanese-babble. You didn't give a warning in the summary to the tune of "I think it's UBER KAWAII to use Japanese words I have a sub-standard understanding of, so be warned!" so I'm not sure how I was expected not to know I didn't like it until I DID read it.

You're just batting a thousand today, huh.

Quamp - Thanks for the review! I do agree with you, the -chan honorific is generally used for girls however in the Sailor Moon anime Usagi does call Mamoru Mamo-chan as a pet name as he calls her Usako.

And whoever is reviwing anonymously, I can't stop you from reviewing but please let's all be nice here. What's with all the hostility? I'm sorry my story is up to your standards but I like it. Thanks anyways though, any reviews are okay in my book!