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by psyca

schedule June 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful.
You have such a wonderful style of writing that captures one's attention.
It literally pulls the reader into the story and makes them a part of it.
The way you write Kenshin and Kaoru is breath-taking and realistic.
I can't think of enough adjectives to describe your way with words.
I guess what I'm trying to say is: "You are a great writer. Please don't ever stop."
Thank you for this story!

-MD
person Aline
schedule September 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ow, I just can't find words to say how much I liked your fic! It was amazing to see how Kaoru was strong even though she needed Kenshin at her side at the same time. The adult content was not apelative, actually it seems to be perfect placed. I really liked it very much! Congratulations. Keep the good work.
person Anon
schedule February 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
" Panting, the futon comes into focus between shaking arms, rumpled from the effort of sitting up.
"


The futon was panting?

Honestly. Think a little. Please? Things like this ruin the entire story.
person LaNoinaa
schedule May 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story! The plot was very intriguing and the story was well written as expected from you. Keep up the awesome work! :D
person puppydog
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the story!!!!
person Anon
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wonderful story... really liked it... lots of action and drama... good job... great work...
person Kai
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely fantastic. Saito was so deliciously in-character, as they all were, and every single moment kept me held to the story. I adore this, it's beautiful, you're an extrememly talented author. Thank you for posting this.
person kookookitty
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
a very powerful and emotional piece. kaoru's fear and trepidation were almost tangible in your description. bravo!
person anon
schedule June 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderfull story with a lovely ending. I\'m so glad you made this story have a happy ending. An angsty, sad, tearfull ending would have, in my opinion, ruined the story. Thank you for not letting this story go unfinished
person GenkaiFan
schedule March 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story line. I can\'t wait to see what happens.

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