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August 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Your story writing is really good, but you have a lot of spelling and grammatical errors. I would suggest typing this through Word or some other program. Other than that, please keep it up!
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May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the ending was really sweet, please write more im dieing to know what happens next
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January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow
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December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wohoo!! Beautifully written. I think there were a few typos...but maybe it was another aff story i read at the same time...Hehe...Oh well. Hopefully, you'll update VERY VERY SOON. I think I'm just gonna die if you don't...
Waiting for an update...or three...
Akito/Tohru Lover
Waiting for an update...or three...
Akito/Tohru Lover
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December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Plz update. It's really good.
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December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Rakanasama...Akito is a guy. A he. I have the first book and in that Shigure says "He wants Kyo to stay too"
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOVE YOUR SSSTTOOORRRRYYYYYY!!!!!! SSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!! ANOTHER CHAPTER (please) AND QUICKLY!!!!!!!!!
Thank-You :D :P :) ;D ;P ;)
Thank-You :D :P :) ;D ;P ;)
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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you must not have watched enough episods or you would know that Akito is a GIRL! Not he..... her. She just doesn't like feminity so she acts like a dude....
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so far, so good. but i gotta say that you have a lot of mistakes in all the chapters. so fix 'em and make sure to update soon!
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July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like what I've read and I can't wait to read more.