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WOW THAT WAS SO AWESOME!!!!Love the night club,the story is both funny and HOT!!!!!^_______^AHAHAH,Also the ending was great!hope to see more from you.

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Good Lord that was HOT!!! Unbelievably HOT! That last chapter made my mouth dry and my eyes blurry. Perfection! And not just the Lemon part either. The way you delved into Hisoka\'s psyche was fantastic. I totally felt his pain and apprehension, and the onslaught of emotions at the club was beautiful. Truly one of my favorite fics EVER!!!

Ayumu: I don\'t get it?
Sakura: What? And this better be important! We stopped in the middle of the story and it was getting good!
Ayumu: What do they mean? Dance? Hisoka said he didn\'t know how, but he does. I don\'t get it.
Sakura: O_O Uh.....Ayumu?
Ayumu: Yeah?
Sakura: They don\'t mean it literatly.
Ayumu: What do you mean?
Sakura: You know it sands for something else.
Ayumu: I stil don\'t get it.
Sakura: Ayumu, for a boy, you are way to innocent.
Ayumu: .............Are you gonna tell me?
Sakura: You just have to read on. Then you\'ll find out.
Ayumu: Oh? Okay.

Ayumu: O_O
Sakura: *laughs neverously* See told you it meant something different.
Ayumu: O_o
Sakura: Sorry people, let\'s just say...Ayumu is a little stupid when it comes to the naughty department.
Ayumu: o_O
Sakura: Yeah..well. We loved this chapie! And the ones that came before it! And if i can get Ayumu out of his stuper then we can read the rest and love them too.
Ayumu: O__O
Sakura: okay then.

ahaahaa...I can\'t stop laughing! That ending was just hilarious.
Anyways, I really, weally, liked this story, you write very very well. It was a bit...well, there was a bit too much crying for my tastes, but sure it is forgiveable. Indeed, who could really resist a mental image of those beautifull bishies in leather. And the last chap sure was hawt.

Hurrah! This is the first YnM fic I\'ve ever read. I just got finished watching it a few weeks ago. I love this story!!! Keep writing! ~_^

OMG that was perfect. It was hot and sexy. I about died when I read the descriptions of their clothes then of them dancing together. You also conveyed lots of emotion, caring and most of all love and trust. You turned this from a PWP to a touching uniting of two souls. This is the best Hisoka and Tsuzuki first time story I have read anywhere. Incredible... absolutely incredible!
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Amy

This was one of the sweetest fics I've read in a long~ time :3 Great job--I absolutely love how you set it up and portrayed the characters ^^ I would love more!

sugoi! waiiiiiiii kawaiii!!!!!!!!!! *fangirl squeal* I love this fic soooooooooooooooooooo much!
Tsuzuki and Hii-chan are soo kawaii together, ne?
Please write more!
Ja ne