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January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY nice!! I was really impressed with the quality and description in this story! The lemon scenes were absolutely amazing!! Such a wonderful story!!!!! There aren\'t enough good adjectives for you right now, ^^ @-->--- GREAT job!!!
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October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*smiles and claps* I loved it! There aren\'t many WELL written TsuzukiXHisoka fics out there but this is totally one of them. But are you really finished? Though I guess there must not be many places to take the story now ne? Well please keep up the great writting and write another one soon please!
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October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh my god. that was the best story I have ever read! I love the paperclips that is just..ingenious. You are my new idol! seriously though. It was well written and I liked how you used the analogy \'dancing\'. YOu displayed there emotions very well and i loved how you were so descriptive yet, not at the same time. more power to you! keep on writing...paperclips...I love it!
-kitsune
-kitsune
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October 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DDDDDDUUUUUDDDEEEEE!!! This is SUCH a good fic! I read around, and I\'ve read alot of lemon, so This just really is the cream of the crop, plenty of plot (well, enough for me anyhow) And lots of love, humor and just good old Lemon! You build up the tention so well, and you make Hisoka and Tsuzuki sound like the cutest couple ever, even though I have other favorites. I am just phyched at how . . . how. . . How ABSOLUTELY beautiful this fic is. I mean, It doesn\'t drag on pointlessly, yet it also isn\'t PWP. (I don\'t have anything against PWP it\'s just. . .) So, there you have it. Im done feeding your ego.
yeah . . .
Ja Ne!
yeah . . .
Ja Ne!
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July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WAAAIIII!!! you\'re such a good writer!!!! i\'ve read Dance Partner\'s at least six or seven times over by now lol anyways, you\'re really awesome so don\'t ever think about stopping your writing cuz then i would prolly die from deprivation lol yup there aren\'t many fanfic writers as good as you (as if anyone could be any better rite? haha) aite well WRITE ON!! ^-^
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July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
heh forgot to mention...i\'m guna draw a piccy of hisoka n tsuzuki in the absolute glamour that you desribed them in. teeheehee *drool* ^~^
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July 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay...I need a cold shower now!! ^^ hehehe Nicely done. ;)
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June 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, that left me BREATHLESS!! What a beautiful piece of erotica! Your descriptions were so very visual, I could just picture how gorgeous Hisoka looked
with his clubbing clothes and emerald stud! And Watari is my favorite shini, so, so I was just melting when you described him in his leather and BDSM-ish belt. ~swoons~
I loved the personality you gave him...he was flirty with both of the others, but not obnoxiously so. You need to write a fic where HE gets some, next!! Jus Just an absolutely gorgeous fic, the lemon was emotional and realistic, and just WONDERFUL! Your style of writing, your grammar and spelling were all impeccable. I just
can\'t praise you enough for such a wonderful fic!! I loved it, truly truly loved it!!
with his clubbing clothes and emerald stud! And Watari is my favorite shini, so, so I was just melting when you described him in his leather and BDSM-ish belt. ~swoons~
I loved the personality you gave him...he was flirty with both of the others, but not obnoxiously so. You need to write a fic where HE gets some, next!! Jus Just an absolutely gorgeous fic, the lemon was emotional and realistic, and just WONDERFUL! Your style of writing, your grammar and spelling were all impeccable. I just
can\'t praise you enough for such a wonderful fic!! I loved it, truly truly loved it!!
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June 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I certainly hope that\'s not the end! Darn it Watari needs to get some! After all he did for Tsuzuki and Hisoka he deserves it! This was so sw but but not the cavity inducing sweet. Very nice descriptions on the clothing, the club, well, everything basically. And I know it\'s just a PWP...sort of...but I followed Hisoka\'s emotions...what he felt, I felt. I think you would be doing the fan fiction community a disservice by not continuing. Please do write more!
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June 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Mmm.... *drools* Very nice. Very very very nice. >3~ You should write more TxH lemon. *nodnodnod* And now, awed by this, I\'m off to read the rest of your work...