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July 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i loved it,i cant wait for your next one. i wanna be the first to review the next one so i will keep checking back so i can hope to read the next story u create.
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June 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Inu x Ash, right on! XD
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June 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Overall not bad but the plot tends to take a huge leap between ideas needs transtion points.