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wow!! this is good!! i can\'t wait for u to update!!! do it soon!! yay!! good luck!!! ^_^

Love the Fan fic
PLEASE KEEP WRITING AND UPDATING!!!
(Sry. DOn\'t have much time to review though I\'d love to say more....
PLEASE UPDATE!

this is starting off interesting....so what happens next...update soon please...

OMG!!
You Have To continue Like, REAL SOON!
please!
I really really Love This Story!

A Cruel Demise is what happens when someone comes to realize that you have not written anymore chappies.

I love this story it is too cute despite the Blood-lust-revenge, though I have to wonder if Kaoru, being the fammed assasin that she is could possibly live very long as an assasin with the way she spouts off her thoughts...i.e. Telling Sanosuke her life story and intentions. I\'d think the Battousia wouldn\'t be so...uninformed about who would want to kill him, if the certain person spread it all over town in even her drunken slurr...he still might be a bit cautious...ne? But I might be spouting nonsense myself as it is your story and you can design the characters mind in the way you please.

Still a good story Please write more.

Great story write more soon!

Oh sweet lemony citrus grant upon CynicalCorpse\'s mind to give us all a good read.

Very interesting story. I can\'t wait to see what happens laters on. The perspectives are interesting and I like how you\'ve made the characters different yet kept the the same to fit the format of the story.

Wonderful job. Another great chapter! LOL, I really liked reading the sake adventure, that was great! So, new feelings are arising between the two. ^_^ I can\'t wait to read more! I like how you\'re developing the relationship between them, and how it\'s done so realistically. They wouldn\'t fall head over heels for each other just like that, it would take time, just the way you\'re doing it. So great job with that. Again, I look forward to reading more soon. Ja ne.

No one can win the battle of the sexes.
There\'s always fraternizing with the enemy.
(I forgot where I read that, and who said it.)

*in british accent* good show, chap! very good!
no, really, though. i liked the chapter. i still think that the way they swear alot is somewhat out of period, but the story is really interesting; especially the way we have insights as to what the characters are thinking. keep it up; can\'t wait to read more.