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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
Nice story!
Just a view things to the German, if you dn't mind.
1. If want to say something like, my love, you can use Liebling. It has mor the meening of it than "Liebe" because this word onely meens the love bu not the person.
2. I think you wanted to say: Ich liebe dich
3. If you want to write Schuldig in German you write him like this Schu/ Schuldig
I hope you are not angr with my! May you can see that my English isn't that good but I just thougt, I'm german, it's my own language, so I can may be halp you with some German words.
If you want to know some other words or senenc, just ask.
I hope you will write again. Sometimes I realy like some desperate fics.
Good luck for writig
Sophia
Nice story!
Just a view things to the German, if you dn't mind.
1. If want to say something like, my love, you can use Liebling. It has mor the meening of it than "Liebe" because this word onely meens the love bu not the person.
2. I think you wanted to say: Ich liebe dich
3. If you want to write Schuldig in German you write him like this Schu/ Schuldig
I hope you are not angr with my! May you can see that my English isn't that good but I just thougt, I'm german, it's my own language, so I can may be halp you with some German words.
If you want to know some other words or senenc, just ask.
I hope you will write again. Sometimes I realy like some desperate fics.
Good luck for writig
Sophia
schedule
June 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Heya. This is really awesome. The angst is painful to the point of beautiful. It deals with deep pain and emotions really well, and I really like your imagery. Thanks for a great read!
- Lady Jade
- Lady Jade