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March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yum. What can I say, i love to break Shu. Nicely done.
schedule
June 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, I\'ll flame ya\' cause ya want me to, but I loved the ficcie! I\'m such a pervy Yaoi girl....hehehehe......and proud of it! Your story made me a happy perv! You know what they say : Yaoi Ouch.
schedule
June 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hm. Writing itself\'s not bad. You\'ve got nympho-Schu down. I like how you have the interjections of his weird little thoughts-- it makes things more interesting than a glamour-sex scene. My only complaints are that you don\'t have much description, you repeat words q oft often, and Brad isn\'t all that in-character. But hey, you\'re better than a lot of people! Keep writing!