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for I Can Make You...

by aquarianbabe

person sha-chan
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really think you should keep going. Its really intresting and very well written. I give you a ten out of 1-10 scale.^_^
person jmi
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely you should continue! This most recent chapter is a great piece showing a lot of thought in just how a person can be broken mentally.

I would really like to see where and how far you can take this.
person Nancy
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, i like your story! I think you should definatly go on^^
person fushigiyugifan
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keep it going pleasee
person LodossFan
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was ...is there a word stronger than fantastic?
person Ashley
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was the hottest thing I have ever read! Please continue!
person me
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
all i can say is poor chichiri
person Black Angel, White Demon
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You should write a sequal to this about what happens to poor (sexy) Chiri. Like, how will he react after his little fuck? Will he still be the same? Plz write a sequal!
person rafusen
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh Nakago is just so cruel!!!!
Chiri: -.0 ...DA!!!
Tas:... My thought essactly! ^-^
Chiri: Why are you grinning? Daa!!! How aweful...fangirls love to torture me...
Hehe hee....that\'s right Chiri....we liked it...^^
person Fire Pendant
schedule August 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WHAT? YOu didn\'t do chichiri yet? YOU HAVE TO FINISH! I really want to see the ending!

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