rate_review Reviews

The realistic way you prtrayed the caracters, especially Rei, is wonderfully realistic. Absolutely brilliant and completely amazing story you have here. The theme is dark, disturbing and screaming of pain, leaving the reader in no psotition to enjoy the sufferning of the girl's torture.
Sometimes you have to remind people what rape is about, really. It is painful, nonconsensual... something terrible to experiance. Even justified the way it was here, it leaves a mark on the reader.
Yours sincerely,
Henryjamestehfifth

This was good. I mean, it was well written. Of course it was awful to read how Gendo raped Rei (I never liked him anyway). Being a woman, that really hurt. But you described Rei\'s feelings very well, they felt so real. And points home for good grammar, too. *grin*

This is excellent work. I liked the way you wrote this, very real and sad. I also think that all the characters are . . . well in character. I do believe they would think and act in such way . This was very good. Please keep writing.

dude ur my idol *sniff sniff* god u rok

Wow...that was heavy, man. And wonderful, especially for a rape fic, which are usually done in such poor taste. This is a heart-breakingly poetic piece, with dead-on characterasation and a flowing style that kept things moving along smoothly, without so much as a break in the narrative to destract us from the storyline. Five Stars, all the way.

This was very well written. You have a great writing style, and really know how to set the mood. I agree that you got the characters of Rei and Fuyutsuki exactly right-so right it was spooky. This was definitely one of the best fics I\'ve read for Eva, it was dark and disturbing and really left a haunting impression in my mind. It was refreshing to see something so professional, no really bad, distracting typos, spelling errors, etc. Thank you for your great story, I\'ll look to read more of your writing.

You know, it\'s funny. I don\'t like rape fics very much at all, but I kept going through the eva storis and findthatthat n one left a commn. So I got curious.
I\'m not sure whether you caught Ikari that well...truth is, Ikari could be so much of a bastard, it COULD tehnicall be accurate. Fuyutski and Rei, however, you got to a t. There are ways to go about a rape fic, and you went th way some just don\'t...no gratification on th side of the narrator, no \"ha ha, I just completely threw away the way the characters really ARE\" and no advocating that rape is good. I like this fic a lot.

I don\'t know what to write except I love that story ! Congratulations and please, keep writing about the two most wonderful pirates in the world!
Cheers
Mary-Ann