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September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it so far! Its got the right amount of lemony goodness. I was able to guess only one of the surprise minions of Rei. And that was Cell. I never would have thought of Naraku, Toguro or Envy, definitely not the latter since I don't watch FMA. Anyway I love it so far. Is Shippo, Sango and Miroku and Kirara going to be joining them? Well, those are my guesses. I can't wait to see who joins them.
I just thought I'd let you know that there is something wrong with one of your chapters. Its chapter 13. There are a bunch of weird errors. I don't think its because of anything you did, but you might want to go and check it out anyway and see if they can't be fixed before someone reams you about them.
Anyhoo! I can't wait until you update again! I'm definitely going to keep my eye on this story!
=^.^=
I just thought I'd let you know that there is something wrong with one of your chapters. Its chapter 13. There are a bunch of weird errors. I don't think its because of anything you did, but you might want to go and check it out anyway and see if they can't be fixed before someone reams you about them.
Anyhoo! I can't wait until you update again! I'm definitely going to keep my eye on this story!
=^.^=
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May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love your story it is so creative i hope you up date very soon
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February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*snickers* I think that the short one is Ed. I just started reading your story today, and so far I really like it. So much in fact that I felt compelled to create an account just so that I could review your story :P. I know three out of the four villains- Naraku, Cell, and Envy, but I've never even heard of the fourth... I'm guessing that there's probably a hero or two from each of the worlds that they came from... Anyway, I'm going to let off here and perhaps see about starting a story of my own... I feel... inspired at the moment :D
ja ne!
~Raven
ja ne!
~Raven
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Great Story! Please update it very soon. I can't wait read more!!!
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHHH CLIFF HANGER!!! I love this fanfiction so much! ^_^ You're one of the best authors on here! I can't wait until your next update!
Many Best wishes, LadyLunarian.
Many Best wishes, LadyLunarian.
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August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really loved reading this story. It is a great work of art that I hope you will be able to continue.
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July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is intriguing, it'll be interesting to see how far Rei goes. Please keep writing this I am really enjoying it! :0)